St. Augustine, FL – November, 2012
I’ve loved ABC books and A-Z lists for quite a while. This post is one in a series on writing, with the subtopic of poetry.
A metaphor is a figure of speech in which a term or phrase is applied to something to which it is not literally applicable in order to suggest a resemblance. It is a much stronger way of making a comparison than using a simile. Metaphors make a bigger impact and give a better description when they are not clichés.
Richness and meaning can be added with metaphors. Here are two examples:
- “…his morning injection of alcohol and his midafternoon booster.” – from Minding Frankie by Maeve Binchy
- “he was going to give himself the twin gifts of sobriety and time”- also from Minding Frankie.
One way to form a metaphor is to make use of the five senses, think about what you are describing and then say it IS that thing. For example, if a man looks like a pickled cucumber, you could say, “he was a pickle, oddly preserved”. Or, after the rain, you could say, “the cotton freshness wafted through the window…”.
Have fun with metaphors, but don’t go overboard. A well placed metaphor can help your reader to really see the story and feel the emotion you want to convey.
A carefully chosen metaphor is a pearl; a poorly chosen metaphor is a splinter.
The poetry focus for M is Minute Poetry. The Minute Poem is rhyming verse form consisting of 12 lines of 60 syllables written in strict iambic meter. The poem is formatted into 3 stanzas of 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables. The rhyme scheme is as follows :aabb, ccdd, eeff
Here is my attempt
A Voyage
Don’t know which way the winds will blow
I do not know
Will rains be soft
Keep love aloft?
I can’t tell if it’s flow or ebb
The water’s web
It’s fingers cold
The grasp foretold
I can’t discern here in the mist
Through swirls and twists
Can’t tell which way
To go today
